极简的英语笔记︱《小王子》Chapter 10(7)地道英语四六级/雅思高分写作表达

大家好，我是极简。

为了方便大家提升英语口语能力，我会在微信公众号文章里面插入一部分英语口语的视频。

接下来我们一同学习《小王子》第10章的最后一部分内容。

《小王子》从来不止是一本童话，它是写给成年人的治愈诗集。书中温柔细腻的文字，藏着最纯粹的爱意与遗憾，同时包含大量四六级、高阶英文句型与地道文学表达，非常适合英文精读、写作积累与语感提升。今天我们就深度精读小王子告别玫瑰的经典片段，全方位夯实英语能力。

一、英中双语对照原文

“I,” replied the little prince, “do not like to condemn anyone to death. And now I think I will go on my way.”

“我，”小王子回答道，“不喜欢判处任何人死刑。现在我想我要继续上路了。”

“No,” said the king.

“别走，”国王说道。

But the little prince, having now completed his preparations for departure, had no wish to grieve the old monarch.

小王子此刻已经做好了离开的准备，他不愿让这位老国王感到难过。

“If Your Majesty wishes to be promptly obeyed,” he said, “he should be able to give me a reasonable order. He should be able, for example, to order me to be gone by the end of one minute. It seems to me that conditions are favorable ...”

“如果陛下希望自己的命令能立刻被遵从，”他说，“那就应该给我下达一个合理的指令。比如，您可以命令我在一分钟之内离开。在我看来，眼下时机已经成熟……”

As the king made no answer, the little prince hesitated a moment. Then, with a sigh, he took his leave.

国王没有做出任何回应，小王子迟疑了片刻。随后，他叹了口气，便告辞离开了。

“I made you my Ambassador,” the king called out, hastily.

“我封你为我的大使。”国王急忙喊道。

He had a magnificent air of authority.

他摆出一副极具威严的架势。

“The grown-ups are very strange,” the little prince said to himself, as he continued on his journey.

“大人们真是太奇怪了。”小王子一边继续赶路，一边暗自感慨。


二、核心句型深度解析

1. 分隔式引语句型

原文句式
“I,” replied the little prince, “do not like to condemn anyone to death.”
句式结构
“台词前半部分,” + replied + 人物, + “台词后半部分”
用法讲解
英文经典文学句式，将说话人插入句子中间，替代单调的 sb said，书面感、高级感拉满，适用于作文、演讲稿、美文创作。
仿写例句
“I,” replied the young man, “am proud to be Chinese no matter where I am.”
例句翻译
“我，”这位年轻人回答道，“无论身在何方，都为自己是中国人而自豪。”

2. 现在分词完成式作状语（高分必背）

原文句式
having now completed his preparations for departure, had no wish to grieve the old monarch
句式结构
Having + 过去分词 + 其他成分, 主语 + 谓语 + 宾语
用法讲解
等同于 After sb had done sth，表示动作先于主句发生，省略连词让句子更紧凑，是四六级、考研、商务写作满分句型。
仿写例句
Having finished all his work, he had no wish to stay in the office any longer.
例句翻译
完成所有工作后，他不想再留在办公室里了。

3. If 被动愿望正式句型

原文句式
If Your Majesty wishes to be promptly obeyed, he should be able to give me a reasonable order.
句式结构
If sb wishes to be + 过去分词, sb should do sth
用法讲解
委婉表达“如果希望被他人如何对待，就应当先做出相应行动”，被动语态凸显正式感，适用于商务沟通、正式表态、哲理表达。
仿写例句
If you wish to be trusted by others, you should keep your promises firmly.
例句翻译
如果你希望被他人信任，就应当坚定地信守承诺。

4. 主观观点万能句型

原文句式
It seems to me that conditions are favorable.
句式结构
It seems to me that + 完整陈述句
用法讲解
替代普通的 I think，语气更委婉、更地道，口语、写作、商务场景全覆盖，零出错率。
仿写例句
It seems to me that he is a man of true wisdom and courage.
例句翻译
在我看来，他是一个拥有真正智慧与勇气的人。

5. As 引导伴随状语从句

原文句式
As the king made no answer, the little prince hesitated a moment.
句式结构
As + 完整从句, 主句
用法讲解
表示“当……之时、随着……”，衔接自然流畅，替代普通的 When，提升句子质感。
仿写例句
As time goes by, we gradually understand the meaning of growth.
例句翻译
随着时光流逝，我们渐渐懂得了成长的意义。

6. 内心独白固定句型

原文句式
The little prince said to himself, as he continued on his journey.
句式结构
sb said to oneself + 内心想法
用法讲解
专属表达“暗自心想、自言自语”，写作刻画人物心理必备，替代直白的 he thought。
仿写例句
He said to himself that he would never give up his dream.
例句翻译
他暗自心想，自己永远不会放弃梦想。


三、重点词汇精讲
1. departure /dɪˈpɑːtʃə(r)/ n. 离开；启程；出发
核心搭配：make preparations for departure 为启程做准备
例句：We have made full preparations for our departure tomorrow.
翻译：我们已经为明天的出发做好了万全准备。
2. grieve /ɡriːv/ v. 使悲伤；使苦恼；悲痛
核心搭配：grieve sb 使某人难过；grieve for sb 为某人哀悼
例句：Don’t let your words grieve the people who love you.
翻译：不要让你的话语伤害到爱你的人。
3. promptly /ˈprɒmptli/ adv. 迅速地；立即地；即刻
用法区分：比 immediately 更正式，多用于商务、公文、正式场景
例句：All staff should obey the manager’s order promptly.
翻译：所有员工都应当立即遵从管理者的指令。
4. hesitate /ˈhezɪteɪt/ v. 犹豫；踌躇；迟疑
核心搭配：hesitate a moment 迟疑片刻；hesitate to do sth 犹豫做某事
例句：Don’t hesitate to reach out if you need any help.
翻译：如果你需要帮助，尽管开口，不要犹豫。
5. ambassador /æmˈbæsədə(r)/ n. 大使；使节；代表
核心搭配：ambassador to + 国家 驻某国大使
例句：He will take office as the Chinese ambassador to Germany.
翻译：他即将就任中国驻德国大使。
6. hastily /ˈheɪstɪli/ adv. 匆忙地；慌忙地；仓促地
用法讲解：副词置于句末，强化动作状态，文学描写常用
例句：She packed her luggage hastily and rushed to the station.
翻译：她匆忙收拾好行李，赶往了车站。


四、易混淆词汇深度辨析

1. promptly VS hastily 高频易混词

- promptly：侧重准时、立刻、不拖延，中性褒义，指行动迅速合规
例句：He arrived at the meeting promptly at 9 o’clock.
翻译：他九点准时抵达了会议现场。
- hastily：侧重仓促、慌乱、匆忙，多带贬义，指因着急而行事草率
例句：He left the room hastily without saying a word.
翻译：他一言不发，慌乱地离开了房间。

2. leave VS take one’s leave 易混表达

- leave：普通用词，泛指离开，口语化，无感情色彩
例句：I will leave the city tomorrow morning.
翻译：我明天早上离开这座城市。
- take one’s leave：正式礼貌用语，特指告辞、辞别，多用于体面、庄重的场景
例句：He thanked the host and took his leave gently.
翻译：他向主人道谢后，礼貌地告辞了。


五、地道表达拆解

1. condemn sb to death
原文出处：do not like to condemn anyone to death
中文释义：判处某人死刑（正式法律用语，文中带讽刺与孩童式的庄重感）
拓展例句：No one has the right to condemn others to death easily.
拓展翻译：没有人有资格轻易判处他人死刑。
2. have no wish to do sth
原文出处：had no wish to grieve the old monarch
中文释义：不愿、无意做某事，替代普通的 don’t want to do sth，语气更文雅克制
拓展例句：I have no wish to argue with anyone about meaningless things.
拓展翻译：我无意和任何人争论毫无意义的事情。
3. by the end of + 时间
原文出处：order me to be gone by the end of one minute
中文释义：在……结束之前、截止到……时候，精准限定时间范围
拓展例句：Please finish the task by the end of this week.
拓展翻译：请在本周末之前完成这项任务。
4. an air of authority
原文出处：He had a magnificent air of authority.
中文释义：威严的气场、权威的风范，固定高阶搭配，描述人物气质
拓展搭配：an air of confidence 自信的气场；an air of calmness 从容的气质
拓展例句：She has a natural air of elegance and confidence.
拓展翻译：她自带一种优雅又自信的气质。
5. continue on one’s journey
原文出处：as he continued on his journey
中文释义：继续踏上旅途，既可指实际赶路，也可比喻人生前行
拓展例句：We will meet difficulties, but we should continue on our journey bravely.
拓展翻译：我们会遇到困境，但仍要勇敢地继续前行。


六、汉译英实战练习 ( 参考答案见文末)

1. 在我看来，他是一位有原则、有担当的人。
2. 做好所有准备之后，他不愿再让在意自己的人伤心。
3. 如果你希望被他人尊重，首先要学会尊重身边的每一个人。
4. 他沉默不语，迟疑了片刻，叹了口气便礼貌告辞了。
5. 无论何时何地，我都为自己是中国人而感到无比自豪。
6. 随着岁月慢慢流逝，我们渐渐读懂了成年人的世界与无奈。
7. 领导者若想被下属立刻遵从，就应当下达合理且清晰的指令。